Critique Fashion Illustration for 2nd semester

*Red Always stands out.  It has a 5 individual or items that are very tasteful.  With longs that are unique in this picture.
*I feel alert when I see the red coming at me.  Red dress wear is very fashionable.  And draws you in closer.
* Red is working and the long legs with high heels or black shoes.   Is well put
*The hair color needs little work.  Needs a vanishing point.  Background help.
*Who are theses people, and what is the subtilte?

Smart Goal

Goal: To become a better Student at AAU
Specific: Pass all classes
Measurable: Every week complete assignments
Resources: Library, 631 Howard Resource center, blackberry planner, organize,
Time frame: 15 weeks
Step 1:  Organize a work space at home for you to work at.
Step 2:  Organize all your books and assignment sheets separately on
table.  Separate each class individual so you will not forget anything.
Step: 3 Seek 631 Howard St resource center to help with your class room assignments.
Step 4: Do you research and edit your work before turning it in.
Step 5. Do not be distracted or delay to the last moment on school items
Step 6. Meet all deadline.